This is a record of my time at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ.
In Dunedin the snow fell on the sheep's heavy coat. The snow came with the blistering wind which hit from the south pole. The lambs were very cold because they don't have a thick coat of wool like there moms.
Hi Anamei, your story describes your Details of your Interesting Facts about the snow and the lamb.What Happens when the snow melts,what do the mothers do?.The great parts were when you described your details and giving me interesting facts that i do not know. this story is the first story that gave me alot of facts about animal that are frozen when it snows and that gives me lots of details. Josephine
I really like you story I can tell you are very good at writing keep up the hard work.
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