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Wednesday, March 2, 2011

On my chocolate cookie i saw five chocolate freckles.I flipped my buiscuit we saw more chocolate freckles under it.Then i ate a freckle and it was spectacular .

On my cookie i saw heaps of crevices on the top.Underneath there were none.I saw millions of crevices.

When i ate a chocolate chip cookie my mouth watered.It was crisp and crunchy.

The biscuit felt like i was in heaven.
By Anamei
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8 comments:

  1. GiannaMarch 7, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    Hi Anamei i liked your story i also liked the amazing words you used i wonder what your chocolate cookie tasted like,next time you can use spaces after full stops.

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  2. chloeMarch 9, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    hi Anamei i like your story about chocolate cookie .
    was it yummy

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  3. SaadiyaMarch 15, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Hi Anamei

    I like the way you said that you saw more freckles under
    the chocolate chip cookie.

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  4. AnameiMarch 21, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Hi Gianna
    Thank you for leaveing me a comment and it tasted like a chocolate cake.Love anamei

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  5. AnameiMarch 21, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    Hi Chloe it was yummy.
    love Anamei

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  6. graceApril 6, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    Hi Anamei nice about the chocolate cookie.
    I wash I had some.

    WELL KEEP UP THE NICE WORK:) :(

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  7. jordenneMay 5, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Hi Anamei,
    I really like the part when you said when you ate the biscuit you felt you were in heaven.

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  8. cheyanneMay 19, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    hi me cheyanne

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